I walked along the beach today, and there I saw them all;
including the latest lost: little Tiven, Tommy, Michaela & my Paul.
Grandma painted at her easel, set upon the dune.
Uncle Eddie bent in half, laughing like a loon,
Oliver growled and chased birds, still thinking he’s a dog,
Tiven gathered sand dollars, arranged them on a log.
Michaela watched a mermaid hit the waves with a fancy spin,
Tommy just looked on with his I-have-a-secret grin.
Paul gathered his beach finds in a pile to take home,
I walked along, bulging pockets, trying to memorize this poem.
I see that look in your eyes. You really think I’m crazy now–I know you do,
but if you walk the beach or woods you’ll have a chance to see them too.
copyright 2013 Patti Hall
May 20, 2013 at 11:09 pm
Love it! I walked the beach with you as I read and it was a wonderful walk. Thank you Patti.
May 21, 2013 at 1:39 am
I just want to stop adding names. The beach has always been where I talk to Paul & Michaela. Today was different. Thanks for following me here. xo
p
May 21, 2013 at 1:59 pm
The very best yet. So visual I could almost smell the sea
May 21, 2013 at 3:37 pm
Thank you! The last stanza is a little clunky, so I will edit a bit. Thank you for commenting and visiting my place here.
xo
p
May 22, 2013 at 10:53 pm
No you aren’t crazy. Inspired is more like it.
May 23, 2013 at 7:55 pm
Thank you.
x o
p
June 8, 2013 at 11:49 am
Goose bumps. I love it. “I walked along, bulging pockets, trying to memorize this poem.” That’s an “ah, yes” line for a poet/writer. Such a fine tribute to your lost loved ones.
June 8, 2013 at 11:53 am
Thank you Susan, so glad you enjoyed it.
June 29, 2013 at 1:09 am
Loved this. Thank you.
June 29, 2013 at 1:17 am
Glad you enjoyed it. It was a “best” day on the beach.
Patti