- Patti fishing in Alaska
- This was written for a story prompt at The Community Storyboard here. It combines experiences from several summer trips to Homer, Alaska. Need to study up on formatting poetry on WP…Also, since I wrote this off the cuff and in a hurry, let’s just call it a draft? :>)
It’s a promising morn, as I see from Outhouse Hill,
I rock in the swing and sip coffee to ward off the chill.
All is sunrise quiet on little Peterson Bay.
There’s Marie at the oyster farm unpacking to stay.
I take the lush green path slowly to make the morning last,
Then detour to pick blueberries for my impromptu breakfast.
We bundle up, grab cameras, snacks and bait,
Captain Honey calls, “Hurry, it’s getting late!”
He goes first to the shore and pulls in the skiff.
I climb down the steep metal stairs, feeling old and stiff.
From skiff, to dock and onto their boat;
This procedure is new for me, for them it is rote.
Captain throttles down and away we go!
Goodbye Peterson’s Bay and Halibut Cove.
The boat, she’s made special, out of stainless steel,
Loaded with all we need, including more than one rod and reel.
The co-pilot, The Mrs. (my sis), is a long time veteran of this—
how far, how deep, how many and what kind of fish.
On the far shore we see a baby bear and perched eagles.
Then Gull Island; cormorants, puffins and a million sea gulls.
I sit in back and watch the rooster tail as the boat splits the water,
I see all kinds of birds diving or floating and, every so often, a playful otter.
Soon I see the Homer Spit and Land’s End as we speed by,
I’ve never deep sea fished and I’m anxious to give it a try.
The loud noise of the engine and the wind in my hair,
My butt is freezing on the cold metal box that I use as a chair.
I’m excited and happy after so many months of grief,
And I’m determined to have fun, no matter how brief.
The engine finally stops and here comes Captain Honey,
He tosses the anchor, as the day begins to turn sunny.
Thirty miles out and I have beginner’s luck,
I catch the biggest and the most; at least that’s the story that stuck!
At one point, we were moving to a new spot and off flew my hat,
Mrs. Captain Honey reversed and the Captain netted it—imagine that!
Sis is a pro at this fishing stuff and also stronger than me;
She helped hold my rod, while I reeled in a fish…or three.
I’m giddy as we reel in halibut and cod,
And even a clown fish, which looks really really odd.
Sis and I are reeling them in left and right and I hook a big skate with wings,
Captain stopped fishing to gaff our catches, cut bait and do other important things.
Out of nowhere, in the middle of all that the blue,
There’s a spout of water…then two!
After that we soon spot the tails,
In no time at all we’re surrounded by whales!
I can’t get over it; I watch until they swim out of sight.
Now we’ve caught our limit and we’ll feast tonight!
Settling in for the long ride back to the cabin,
I’m sorry my visit will soon come to an end.
The boat points to Katchemak Bay as we go,
I’m in the back looking in amazement at an active volcano.
There’s a huge white plume, against the blue,
Over to my right are the other two.
Volcanoes and glaciers make this a special place to be,
But better than that, is the time I get to spend with my family.
Patti Hall 2013
August 24, 2013 at 5:16 pm
Lucky you–Alaska in the summertime. And a narrative poem to show for it. I like the idea of a a draft poem, but you have those rhyming couplets down pat–maybe no need!
August 24, 2013 at 5:25 pm
Captain or The Mrs. (my sis) may have to edit for technical bloopers. I really did write this on the run and spent no time editing.
Glad you like it. Yes, all but one in my family, lives in Alaska, aside from extended family who are much closer.
Thank you for stopping in again.
August 24, 2013 at 7:15 pm
I’m thinking ‘throttle-up’ or ‘full-ahead’…other than that… the Dr. will see you now…
August 24, 2013 at 7:17 pm
Thanks, I was not sure about that…
August 24, 2013 at 8:05 pm
Nice 🙂 About the formatting thing, good luck with that. I would really like some more and better (more STABLE) text editing options!
August 24, 2013 at 8:18 pm
I agree. Stable is right, as it looks fine and then it just doesn’t. grrrrrrrr
August 25, 2013 at 2:21 pm
I get so frustrated with wordpress. i just write in word and then copy and paste
August 26, 2013 at 12:43 am
That’s what I do to, but this time it gave me fits.
August 28, 2013 at 4:49 am
You might try a plug-in called CKEditor. It gives you lots of word processing options while formatting your post.
August 28, 2013 at 7:15 am
I will keep this note for after I get my computer tuned up. Thank you, Susan.
August 25, 2013 at 5:12 pm
Wow! my family was just in Alaska without me and this reminded me of them ❤ nice vlog by the way, I am reading lots of your posts. Maybe you will also like mine 🙂 http://www.fromperutotheworld.wordpress.com
August 26, 2013 at 12:46 am
Thank you, I always like to find a new friend and place to visit. I will stop by later.
August 27, 2013 at 12:09 am
I really loved this Patti, so full of life and…wildlife! Whales….Wow!!! My Dad did a lot of sailing and fishing when he was younger, and I’ve had a few wonderful early morning in a boat experiences with him, but nothing to top this…your poem exudes fresh air and excitement, I wanted to be there – fabulous! Thanks for sharing:-) H xxx
August 27, 2013 at 1:39 am
Thank you. It was fun writing it. Alaska is a gloryful place. and being with my family there is best of all.
August 28, 2013 at 4:51 am
I love it, Patti. You have a gift for observing and sharing in a way that really communicates!
August 28, 2013 at 7:17 am
Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Susan. I do have fun with it.
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